Friday, February 11, 2011

Musing ...... Repetitive Poem ....... Happy Valentine

As simple thoughts floated through my mind,

I wondered why did I need you so much?

Why I wanted you so much?

Why did I love the way your docile touch on the outside of my flesh, make me feel in the inside of my heart, and the way you playfully nipple on my ears, gave me goose pumps?

Why are your kisses sweeter when they come from nowhere, for no reason other then you wanted too?

Why do I love holding the flesh of your body tight to mines, in the middle of the night while you are deeply sleeping?

Why does my desire for you still burn deep in the depths of my soul, even after endless years of togetherness?

Just as these simple thoughts finish flashing through my mind, my mind plays a witless game on me,

By remembering how desolated my life was before you...

Happy Valentine....


  1. this is beautiful. i like it a lot. *sigh*

  2. Thank you Tempting, I appreciate the comment as always...

  3. This was well written especially with alot of emotion and feeling. I loved it. Good one especially for Valentine's day

    Thanks again for commenting on my new blog. I appreciate it a lot, there definitely will be new stories and poems to come for sure.

  4. Thank you Poetic_Butterfly, it's nice to see you posting....

  5. I see we use the same style in writing poetry.

    And it is interesting to read poems from the guy's point of view. It says a lot about you...

  6. Thank you I throughly enjoyed it

  7. Purplr dress, thank you for the visit and comment, it is appreicaited...

  8. Heaven, Thank you much, we do have the same style and similar thoughts..
    I enjoy yor poems alot..