Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Devotion... Prose Poem.... (Repost from 5-7-11)

A tragedy struck my family this weekend. As my spouse and I laid together in thoughts, she mentioned this was the worst Mother Day weekend she ever had. I reminded her how much more tragic it could have been, and how proud I was in our family surrounding itself with love in this time of need. I wrote this poem to let her know what had been planned for that night, but even after facing a family tragedy, it ended the same. With us bonding with love, as I held her while she slept in my arms...

Darkness surrounds the lone candlelight,

But cannot keep its flickering light from piercing through its dark denseness,

As two lovers lying face to face in bed, held each other in a deep embrace of love...

Soft music serenades their ears,

Affection serenades their souls,

As father time continuous marinating of their love, keeps flowing...

Lips embrace in a soft wet kiss,

Then taste,

Then kiss deeper,

Sending wave after wave of loving sensations through their bodies, Covering their naked souls with pure love...

Intertwine are their lips,

Intertwine are their tongues,

Intertwine are their minds with the essence of true love,

As two heart beats, beat in a harmonious beat of one, while soft flesh melts into softer flesh...

A whispered "I love you" is met with a sweeter, "I love you",

While devoted caressing eyes, wonder through each other...

Clenched embrace produces,

Soft docile touches seduces,

Wet warm kisses introduces,

A love born once again,

In the bedroom whose dense darkness, could not smother the loving flicker, of a single candlelight...

With love... Your 1man


  1. That's so sweet and so loving.

  2. Your words seduce me.

    Simply lovely and loving words. I am so impressed by your prose.

    As much as I loved the prose, I was deeply moved by the intro note before I ever got to the beautiful love note.

    May you and yours have a wonderful weekend and heal from the tragedy,

  3. Yes, lovely and loving words.

    Sending you and your family good thoughts.

  4. 1Man, I am late in my response but never to late to say my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family...My heart is moved by your words you are a beautiful soul.


  5. My friend, only time can ease the pain.
    Comfort and peace to their hearts.


    Nany Carvalho

  6. Hedone, I'm happy my you could feel my words, and thank you for the luv...

  7. TemptingSweets99, Thank you for your kind words and good vibes...

  8. Nancy C, Thank you, and you are right, everyone is slowly getting better at their own pace...

  9. Drenchxoxo, Thank you much....

  10. Meagan, Thank you so much for your comments, I appreciate it...

  11. first, i'm sorry about the tragedy your
    family has experienced. i hope you're alright.

    the music, your words...

    touched me.

  12. I am touched.... that was very moving~

  13. Lisa, We are healing everyday, and thank you for the kind words...