Saturday, December 3, 2011

Revelation (1) ..... Prose Poem Revisited .......

Show me...

Show me how to touch your flesh in such a way; you will never want me to stop

Show me how to kiss your lips so docile your knees buckle

Show me how to hold your hand, so you won't ever let mines go

Show me the darkest corner of your mind, so I can shower it with sunlight, so you won't ever stumble again in the dark

Show me the way to your heart, and I will show you the way to fulfillment

Show me the way to your soul, so mines can intertwine with yours

Show me all of your love, and I shall surrender all of mines for you to hold for eternity,

Show me...

Repetition Poem: Repetition of a sound, syllable, word, phrase, line, stanza, or metrical pattern in a poem

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  1. oh...

    how i want to show.


  2. I like it...just have a question. Why do you say mines instead of mine? I don't know a lot about poetry and wondered if I was missing something.


  3. This poem makes me want to say, "Oh, I'll show you, all right!" ;-) Love your poem.

  4. Each blog better than the other ... .. very erotic texts inviting her ... kisses!

  5. beautiful and deep.