Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Surrender ......... Tanka Poem

Surrender to me

Every soft beat of your heart

Fill it with my love

Let it touch your lonesome soul

While making both of us whole

Tanka is a Japanese poetry type of five lines, the first and third composed of five syllables and the rest of seven. Tanka is the oldest type of poetry in Japan.

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8 comments:

  1. MeaganFebruary 24, 2010 at 7:14 PM

    As the saying goes you learn something new every day. Tanka...short, simple, and seductively sweet.

    Meagan (:

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  2. SILVIAFebruary 25, 2010 at 4:19 AM

    Sencillo, corto y conciso, a la par que bello.
    Besitos!!!

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  3. 1ManViewFebruary 25, 2010 at 12:07 PM

    Thanks meagan, I think you would be god at these with your style....

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  4. 1ManViewFebruary 25, 2010 at 12:07 PM

    Gracias Silvia .....

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  5. BellaMarch 1, 2010 at 12:25 PM

    Que lindo es pasar por aqui a saludarte
    besitos

    Bella

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  6. YvyBMarch 4, 2010 at 6:43 AM

    I love and love poems dear :)
    Kiss

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  7. 1ManViewMarch 5, 2010 at 8:22 PM

    Hola Bella

    Gracias por visitarnos en, teniendo aquí es siempre un placer

    Besos

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  8. 1ManViewMarch 5, 2010 at 8:27 PM

    Olá YvyB,

    E eu amo ter você aqui

    Tenha uma ótima semana

    Abraços ..

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