Friday, March 5, 2010

Devotion......... Prose Poem


















Thump_ thump...

Thump_ thump...

Thump_ thump...

Sounds of

Slow

Soft

Beats

Of our hearts

Reverberating inside our chest,

That

Rise

Then fall

Without notice

As lungs inhale

Then softly exhale in a quiet whisper...

Soft curvy legs

Lie on top of firm straight legs,

Fingertips softly ease over my chest and stomach

As my right arm holds her close and secure to my bosom...

Left hand playfully teases her nose and ears

With touches so docile they tickle...

Minds are in a distance tranquil place of solitude,

As silence entertains our ears...

Eyes rest

As the dim lit room acts as our vessel of escape from the world around us

Love circles the room

Holding man made gadgets of sound and visual pleasure at bay

While love plays a song of inner harmony on our soul,

As we embrace and soak in each others essence...

19 comments:

  1. My heart thumps and skips a beat as I read, putting my mind in a place of love. Your writing inspires our hearts reminding us of everything love.

    Smiles'
    Meagan

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  2. thump-thump... this is passion... this is so beautiful!!!

    Kisses in your heart and great weekend!!

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  3. Oh my...this is just beautiful... *sigh* So glad to have found you.

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  4. maravilloso poema Manview,me encanta la imagen.
    Besazos!!!

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  5. Corpos entrelaçados em um só rítmo a entregar-se com paixão, carinho... Essência mútua num encontro de prazer...

    Adoro ler Você...

    Beijos confessos...

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  6. Excelente sensación....
    Me encanta el latido del sentir del cuerpo entrelazado...
    Un beso

    bella{F}

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  7. Beautiful...loved reading you!
    Keep well.

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  8. Thank you much meagan, I appreciate your comment...

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  9. Thanks a lot, in the biue hour..

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  10. Delicious. It makes us dream. Hot kisses

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  11. Três Tempos, thank you so much, and happy B-day to you...

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  12. Hola Silvia, gracias por el maravilloso comentario ..

    Besazos

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  13. Hello Confesso ..

    I'm happy you enjoyed the poem...


    Beijos...

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  14. Olá Confesso ..

    Eu estou feliz que tenha gostado do poema ...


    Beijos ...

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  15. FC's pet, thank you for the lovely comment...

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  16. wsxwhx707, thanks fir the spam...

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