Surrender to me
Every soft beat of your heart
Fill it with my love
Let it touch your lonesome soul
While making both of us whole
Tanka is a Japanese poetry type of five lines, the first and third composed of five syllables and the rest of seven. Tanka is the oldest type of poetry in Japan.
Yo te entrego felic noche y mil beso...
ReplyDeletewonderful tanka... "feel it with my love" I love this line.
ReplyDeletesweet and very lovely :)
ReplyDeleteLuna, Gracias
ReplyDeleteSweets, Thank you...
ReplyDeleteurban butterfly, your comment is appreciated, thank you...
ReplyDeleteI really, really like this poem. May I share it on my blog sometime?
ReplyDeleteLove,
Kitty
P.S. Of course I'd give you the credit:)!
Kitty, thanks for the read and yes you may, I'm flattered by your jester..
ReplyDeleteAre you saying I am joking?! I don't get it.
ReplyDeleteK.
Kitty, by no means... I said I was flattered and I meant it. When someone ask you to post your poem on their site, that is a great compliment. Maybe I should have not used the word jester. I apologize, I am very distracted at this moment.. It shall come out soon...
ReplyDeleteNo worries...just wasn't sure what you meant and I obsess about things until I understand them, even if it's a silly little word like jester, lol!
ReplyDeleteLove,
Kitty
@Kitty, A big hug ....
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