Saturday, April 7, 2012

Just.. Prose Poem

I just,

Want to kiss you with a kiss so soft lips melt,

A kiss so wet, your mouth waters just thinking of me,

A kiss so deep, the earth beneath you quakes,

A kiss so sweet, sugar now taste like sour cream


I just,

Want to embrace you tightly in closed arms,

Hold your body warmth, beside mines,

Hold you so close; I can smell your essence,

Hold you so close; I can feel the soft warmth of your exhaled breath, on the nape of my neck

Hold you so close; I can feel the placid beats of your heart


I just,

Want to make you happy,

Give you all the love you want,

Give you all the love you need,

Give you my soul,

Give you all of the emotions of my heart

Give you what ever it takes to satisfy you


I just,

Want to be the one on your mind at night

Be the one on your mind in the morning light

The one whose love, fits yours just right


I just,

Want us to be deeply in love,

When the moon rise,

Gives way to the morning sun



1Manview © 1999 – 2012

18 comments:

  1. As always 1manview, beautifully written seemingly effortlessly from your heart; without a doubt I know that you are loved, and you easily returning that love without doubt she too knows she’s loved.
    Cyber Love,
    Meagan

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    1. Thank you meagan, it took years, but we made it...

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  2. what girl doesn't want to be kissed like that?
    or held like that?
    or made happy?
    or loved?

    tender words.
    thank you for sharing them with us 1manview.

    xo

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    1. Thank you for the kind comment Lisa...

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  3. I know I say this all the time, but Daddy was holding me like this and kissing me like this just this morning:)! I love that you put in words what is my life. It's just beautiful what you've written and I'm sure that's how you love and kiss ML, otherwise you wouldn't be able to write like that.

    Love,
    Kitty

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    1. Sometimes I feel guilty like yourself, for having someone to love this much... Thank you for commenting...

      Big hug
      1manview

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  4. Dang you 1ManView... I know we had this conversation before, and I know you have been through a lot in your life, but I yearn for what you have in your heart....

    Big hug
    Poetic Estrus ....

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    1. Thanks Pe, the past is what makes the present worth having..

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  5. Pure love... Beautifull to witness.

    Beijo libertyo

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  6. love and passion beautifully written

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    1. THak you Plain Observer, I appreciate the comment... Please visit again..

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  7. Oh this is so very very moving, beautiful, wrenching.

    It's a keeper.

    You're stirred many emotions with this amazing piece.

    My favorite line: A kiss so sweet, sugar now taste like sour cream

    Thank you for sharing.

    -H

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    1. Thank you so much Hedone for the wonderful comment.,, After four days of a posting, comments have to be approved before they posting. That way I keep up with comments on older poems...

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  8. Hi, Just dropping by again to say I really loved this poem.


    I had written a comment this morning but it seems to have disappeared in outer space.

    -H

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