Thursday, March 29, 2012

Relinquished 1.... Prose Poem

This poem was written for a dear friend of mine, who thought no one knew how they felt..

In my dream I was alone


Slowly drifting out to sea without a paddle nor sail


The moon had a reddish glow to it


The wind was so still it was eerie


I sat all alone with nothing but my thoughts


No one to talk to me


No one that could hear me


No one to hold and comfort me


No one to give comfort too


No one.......


In my dream I was alone


Then I woke up and saw you next to me


In my heart I am still alone...




1Manview © 1999 – 2012


6 comments:

  1. I feel very sad for your friend.

    Thank God I have my family, friends, and most importantly, Daddy!

    Love,
    Kitty

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    1. Sometimes we tare so busy living, we take our blessings for granted...

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  2. I will take a deep breath, close my eyes and imagine that this poem was written just for me.

    Meagan...

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  3. I can relate to the feelings and emotions from this poem that alone feeling even if you do have people in your life, its like its not enough.

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    1. Sometimes you are not receiving the kind of love you really need...

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