Monday, March 26, 2012

Make Love To Me.....

This poem was writing for a theme many years ago. It has never been posted or corrected. It was written straight out of my mind. I'm sharing it today to share this thought with someone else.....

What does it take to make you make love to me?

What does it take to make you feel the empty feelings inside of me?

What does it take to make you feel my loneliness inside, as most night

your body lay limp less beside me?

What does it take to make you feel my high desire for all of you, your

mind, body and soul?

What does it take to make you feel my touch all over your body, while you

sleep in the safety of my domain?

What does it take for you to know I'll give you anything and everything, if

you just ask me too?

What does it take for me to get that same high energy you give out to your

work place and our family and your friends?

What does it take to make you feel my love for you, when from behind I

walk up to you and hug you for no reason other than to feel your

essence next to mine?

What does it take for you to feel my love of tasting your body, as I suckle

on your breast?

What does it take to make you feel my passion awaken as my wandering

tongue lick your body from head to toe, up and around your hills,

down your valley then refreshes Itself by sucking up your nectar?

What does it take for you to see, I give you pure pleasure as I suck you

nectar and awaken all your senses as you pull my hair and moan

out loud uncontrollable ?

What does it take to make you see the pleasure I receive, seeing your body

shake and treble all over from just the soft touch of my tongue on

your sweetness?

What does it take for you to know, I love the feeling I get when the head of

my manhood opens the doors of your sweetness, and fills its

walls to its capacity as my shaft pushes the head of my manhood

downward into your corridor of love, descending to its darkest


What does it take to let you know the pride I feel in seeing the pleasure on

your tormented face as I slowly deep stroke my manhood in your

sweetness, making sure your pleasure is second to none, as your

body quakes?

What does it take for me to let you know how much pleasure I felt after

your body quakes all over, then my shaft gets surrounded by your

sweetness, and you gyrate your hips in a circular motion making

your sweetness tug my shaft tight like a boa constrictor in a death

squeeze, until it squeezes all the white creamy milk out of my loins,

as my body convulse in ecstasy?

What does it take for you to hear me whisper these words in your hear; I

love you, and continue my quest to fore fill all your needs mentally

and physically, while not dosing off to sleep after our night long

love making festival?

What does it take to make you realize my needs are more than an hi,

goodbye, I love you too, as you stroll thru your daily agenda as we

work to stride forward in our lives?

what does it take for you to understand, I would understand, if there was

another man, at least I would know why I stand alone.

What does it take for you to understand that this judge just make one

swipe of his gable, and ended all the years of our hope, work, dreams

and love, because you wouldn't make love to me?

1ManView © 1999 – 2012


  1. Wow, that's powerful stuff! It makes me want to have an even better marriage.


    1. Kitty, your marriage is like two ducks in a big pond, all by themselves... Enjoy...

  2. i don't know why, but this seems very personal.

    love the words.

    1. I won't lie, at that particular time, it was very personal...

  3. The ending lines make this sensual poem so sad ~

    Happy day to you ~

    1. You are right Heaven, but in real life, it had a very happy ending...

  4. 1manview, thank you for sharing this; and I have to tell you that half way through my eyes began to fill with water. Yes, you get me, that's it babe, that's all I'm saying!! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, and connecting with my emotions, my hurt, my wants and desires.

    Cyber Love,

  5. You are welcome Meagan, I wrote this to vent, and it seem to fit what you are going through. Sometimes hearing that others have traveled the road you are on, makes you feel like you are not walking the road alone....

    Cyber Hugs,

  6. I'm glad this had a happy ending. Very poignant poem.

  7. love and the passion it at times seeks cannot be demanded nor forced.

    1. So true.. Thank you "A Plain Observer", for the read and comment

  8. eu sou completamente apaixonada pela tua escrita.
    maravilhosamente envolvente.

    1. core
      Muito obrigado, eu agradeço o seu comentário ...

  9. Just because you share a bed, doesn't mean it's love... Could feel the pain at the end..

  10. Wow, this was very deep good questions makes you wonder. Things happens when the other person feels neglected and alone. I felt each word and emotion as I read this, deep!

    1. Thank you PB, I appreciate the connection of my words and feelings....