Sunday, October 9, 2011

Embraced.... Repetitive Poem .....

You are, the air I breathe,

The water that quench my thirst,

The substance that fills my hunger,

The eyes, that empower me to see,

The ears, that enables me to hear.


Life without you, would have no meaning,

Life without your touch, would have no feelings,

Life without your kisses, would taste sour,

Life without your essence, would lead my being to wonder lost,

Life without your being, would make mine to perish,

Life without your love, would slowly suffocate, the air out my soul.

That's why I cherish,

Every rise of the sun

Every moonlit night

Every hour

Every minute

Every second of life,

We spend as one...







10 comments:

  1. What a treasure. Love your prose.

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  2. Thank you for sharing such beautiful love moments. I don't always comment but when I am feeling weak in my own relationship, I come here for uplift.

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  3. Precioso!
    Lo expresas de una manera tan simple, que es una delicia leerte y sentirte.
    Un placer pasar por aquí.
    Besos

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  4. TS99, Always appreciated your comments..

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  5. Drenchxoxo, Thank you, it's nice to know that you are reading the other side of me and it has an positive effect on you...

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  6. *whispered sighs*

    what woman wouldn't want to hear these things?

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  7. just so emotionally moving...I love when emotions leave traces of goose pimples across the skin.

    Meagan

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  8. lisa, thank you for the humbling comment... ;)

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  9. Respirando entre palabras, Gracias, le agradezco su comentario mucho ...

    Besos

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  10. Meagan, Graciaus, I was just thinking of you...

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