Monday, January 13, 2014

Open door (1) Thoughts series ... Prose poem

Sometimes when I'm searching for images on the web, I run into one that speak volumes to me,
 because it reminds me of a piece of my own life. This is one of those images...



Mind crowds with thoughts,
Body unrest in stature, perceive across  the surface of my face

Your presence hover in front of me,
Your voice calm in silence,
While fingertips tenderly ease through the density of my hair

Silence surrounds your body origin,
Calm is in your touch,
As our bodies embrace, voices speak speechlessly

My fingers aimlessly roam across the softness of your backside,
Calming the edginess of my nerves,
My head rest against your body, letting the load on my shoulders be lifted,
My thoughts slowly fades into the vastness of your silence,
While the inner rage and turmoil fighting inside me is let go,
Opening the door of my soul, so it can walk out into the calm of your love,
Leaving me with a body of sanctuary, full of inner peace ....


Thanks LC ....
1Manview © 1999 – 2013

12 comments:

  1. What a beautiful expression of how each lends strength to the other in times of need.

    hugs
    p

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    1. Thank you PS, even superman has to rely on Louis sometimes.
      She is my Louis.. :)

      peace
      1ManView

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  2. Solo el amor abre la puerta del alma
    hermosas palabras

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    1. Muchas gracias por el coment.
      Te lo agradezco ...

      besos
      1ManView

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  3. Wow ! profundo y hermoso ! Saludos

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    1. Gracias por la visita ...

      Muchas gracias por el comentario maravilloso ...

      Saludous,
      1ManView

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    1. Thank you much Suzy...

      peace and love
      1ManView

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  5. wonderful words; wonderful image.

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    1. Gracious my friend. Happy to see you...

      peace
      1ManView

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  6. Two souls and one body. Nice text and very god pic.

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  7. Thank you Josep, I appreciate the comment.... Please visit again.

    peace
    1ManView

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