Saturday, May 30, 2009

Revelation ..... Repetition Poem ....


Show me...

Show me how to touch your flesh in such a way; you will never want me to stop

Show me how to kiss your lips so docile your knees buckle

Show me how to hold your hand, so you won't ever let mines go

Show me the darkest corner of your mind, so I can shower it with sunlight, so you won't ever stumble again in the dark

Show me the way to your heart,  and I will show you the way to fulfillment

Show me the way to your soul, so mines can intertwine with yours 

Show me all of your love, and I shall surrender all of mines for you to hold for eternity

Show me...


Repetition Poem: 

Repetition of a sound, syllable, word, phrase, line, stanza, or metrical pattern in a poem


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6 comments:

  1. Há transbordar paixão na internet.
    Bom ? Não sei...
    Bjs!

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  2. Lutar pela felicidade e viver a vida.
    Valorizar as coisas boas
    E contribuir para melhorar o modo de vida de todos
    O presente é a base do futuro.
    Viva feliz e ajude os outros a serem felizes.

    um beijo

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  3. "Somos todos viajantes pelas agruras do mundo, e o melhor que podemos achar em nossas viagens é um amigo honesto."

    um Beijo

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  4. Loved it and will talk poetically, but it is for you poet, in words I'll lead your lips, so here you feel !!!

    You're beautiful love to come visit me and I think the time to write poetry for you, kisses on your lips pouty !!!

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  5. I wrote a poem with this dialogue, see comment !!!

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