Sunday, October 23, 2011

Whisper From The Dark ... Prose Poem


A whispering sound of "I love you" came from out of the dark from her bed side

An "I love you" is whispered back into the dark shadows


As I walk away with a smile on my face,

I realize we had just exchanged three simple words,

But those three simple words,

Made my heart fill up with the warmth of the sun...


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12 comments:

  1. voidOctober 23, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    this is beautiful! when I think about the warmth of the sun, I think about extreme heat, that if you get too close, it will burn you up! that is quite intense, but so is love. there's nothing like it...

    thanks for sharing! :)

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  2. AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 12:47 AM

    keep whispering and shouting those words.

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  3. BemseiOctober 25, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    Three simple words...chang Man's life, for sure!
    Like it here!

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  4. BemseiOctober 25, 2011 at 1:23 PM

    Sorry: "Change..."

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  5. lunaOctober 26, 2011 at 4:22 AM

    Bellissimo blog complimenti...
    grazie per la tua visita...
    Un abbraccio..

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  6. DrenchxoxoOctober 26, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    simple yet POWERFUL words

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  8. 1ManViewOctober 27, 2011 at 11:22 PM

    urban butterfly, Thank you for the read and comment...

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  9. 1ManViewOctober 27, 2011 at 11:23 PM

    Ts, I plan on it... Thank you ...

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  10. 1ManViewOctober 27, 2011 at 11:24 PM

    Bemsei, thank you, I'm glad I found your blog once again...

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  11. 1ManViewOctober 28, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    Luna, gracias, por favor visite otra vez ...

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  12. 1ManViewOctober 28, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    Drenchxoxo, So true, thank you for commenting...

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